Very nice.
Some things I think should be pointed out:
1. Jebus walking forward of the screen needs better footwork... (I laughed, sorry.)
2. The auditor walked into the room in front of the wall, I think.
3. Some of the pauses are too long.
4. That one guard shooting at the door is too stupid. Mind making them a lil smarter???
Overall, its good work.
~Depes Hales~