Good one.
I don't like Hulalaoo either........... Hulalaoo is a guy posting gay stuff in the art portal...
~Depes Crystalline~
Good one.
I don't like Hulalaoo either........... Hulalaoo is a guy posting gay stuff in the art portal...
~Depes Crystalline~
Great collab.
Most of the scenes moved slow. Also, there were problems with the layering of objects. And I noticed that the characters slide while they walk. Don't do that. Great work though. Hope to see more.
~Depes Crystalline~
Needs improvements.
First of all, bring the arm and the pencil to the front. The eraser on the pencil is bent at an odd angle, but that's much a big deal. The fingers on the hand are not very clear. Draw lighting to bring out the arm. Don't use the gradient colors given by the program. The eraser was badly drawn. Again, use lighting to show the edges and the edges of an eraser are slightly round, so try to do that. You can watch the Pencilmation series or Animation vs. Animatior 1 and 2 for help. Using a crumpled peice of paper as the background was good though. Keep animating. You are going to be one of the top animators in no time.
~Depes Crystalline~
Great!
I like the way you are improving and your unique style of animation. I especially love the new designs you made for Hank and Tricky. This flash is honestly the best I have ever seen as far as animation and effort goes.
Hmm..
Couple things that stand out. Some of the scenes were slow... More than half of the parts need more originality. I mean come on! STOP using other people's main characters. Oh, and the music could have looped.
~Depes Crystalline~
This is great.
The only complaint I have is the smoothness of the characters' movements. Otherwise, Great artwork and great job.
~Depes Crystalline~
I use powerpoint, nothing else. Don't judge me. ~Depes Crystalline~
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