depes7448's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[You Have To Lose]

Um... Well...

There are many things in this game that made me say "No... Just... No." I'll try to list all of them.

1. Obviously there was only one level. Try making more.

2. Characters, objects, and background shows little to no effort. You might want to put more effort into it. Seriously.

3. Music is a bit low. At least make the volume louder.

4. By placing that "You lose. You win." thing at the end, I got the message that you were calling me stupid. Sometimes the timing you place on the words appearing and disappearing and the design of the words can send a subtle, but clear message to people. Don't do that next time.

5. This game has no point to it. In other words people like to say, "the storyline". It is very easy to make a story. Just... Don't push yourself...

Unfortunately, your game to me... is a game people post to spam the portal... Find a good reason for anything you're about to make before you make it. If you have a good reason, state it in your comments so that people will understand why you made what you made even if your submission is poorly made. Sorry for the harsh review.

~Depes Hales~

matrix5565 responds:

Anyone who posts "there was only one level," "it was too short," or "the design is basic" should not be reviewing the game because they obviously didn't pay attention.

[In Utero]

It's a good game.

Next time put less enemies... Thats all I have to say.

~Depes Hales~

FetusFulp responds:

if that's all you have to say, then you may as well not have left a review. you're useless.

[Going Up!]

cool

but make it longer...

Renandchi2 responds:

maybe I'll make a sequel...