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[the Forrest Lodge]

Interesting game.

Umm... You could include a map of the thing. The rooms were confusing me like going through a window and ending up somewhere on a different level with no windows. And... I found that sometimes, when I dragged something and let go, it stayed in the same place and I have to drag it back or exit the room. You could also make it so that we can exit out where we came in... It was annoying to have to go through the whole thing again just t get out and think of a new solution... Ummm....... Maybe post a walkthrough for those of us going insane trying to figure out what to do next? And... err... your rugs (if thats what they are) are badly drawn. Also your moon looks like its right there between the castle walls. It doesn't look as if it is far away. And your perspective of the pipe in the overview looks funky when it comes out the front of one building but goes back to the building farther away. Yea... and one last thing. You can convey us hints through thoughts our character would have when we click on certain things... Or the light switches. Or you could do the speech bubbles when the character talks to his/herself like in some point and click games. Can't wait to see the finished version.

~Dees Crystalline~

iisotripyy responds:

Cheers, yeah I spent more time drawing the outside; I'll spend more time on the interiors. A walkthrough is also a good idea, I'll post a link to it in the comments when done. I might fix up the moon too, and definitely the dragging bug etc.... thanks for the feedback it's very helpful.

[Battle of Lemolad]

A few problems make this game unenjoyable.

Because we cannot depend on the market to get much resources, it is inevitable that you will run low on some items. For me, my main problem was meat, and then wood.

Also, you could make the game so that when we run low on gold during a level, we can revert to silver for a higher price. I ended up with more silver than I knew what to do with.

As for the soldiers that remain on your feild when you beat the level, you could have them stay on the feild for the next level, instead of having them disappear.

Here is how unbalanced my resources were after beating the last level:
Meat: 102 Wood: 118 Stone: 50 Silver: 728 Gold: 129 Magic: 28

The game was too short and too easy.

~Depes Crystalline~

[Aura Braver]

Just one improvement needed.

Mabye at the end of each level, you could give us an extra life?

~Depes Crystalline~

[Toss the Turtle]

This is great...

There is still one problem. When you move to fast, you just sail through objects instead of reacting to them like bombs or spikes.

~Depes Crystalline~

[Match the Jewels]

Great start.

If you are going to make another game like this, tweak the scripting so that we can just click the box and not the jewel to switch two things. Also, you could look to Bejweled games as an example for what you can do. Hope you become an amazing scriptor.

~Depes Crystalline~

stian7 responds:

That sound smart, I will remember that to next time. Thank you :)

[Kidnapped by Ghosts]

Hmm...

The puzzles were not very challenging and the game is short. Also, it almost seemed as if you made a story for this, but when I reached the end, I was disappointed when there was NO ending. Next time you work on a game like this, think about these things please.

~Depes Crystalline~

[Cosmic Crush 2]

Hmm

The only con about this game... Is that you made the gravity incredibly strong during the galaxy stage. Once you came close enough to another galaxy, you could not escape it's gravity.

~Depes Crystalline~

[T E T R I S ' D: The Game]

Er...

Just one problem. During the tutorial, I practiced using the j key but for some reason when i landed, I sort ofmelted and then my character was doing some weird ass stomp dance next to the wall and I couldn't do anything. Besides that, it was a great game.

~Depes Crystalline~

[Cyto-Life]

Sad.

This is a cheap imitation of Spore. A lot of the objects are drawn similiar too. More originality is needed. If you are going to make an identical game, out do the original and don't copy a lot of the original's characters, backgrounds, etc.

~Depes Crystalline~

[30 Ways To Kill Hank!]

er...

Next time try to make various movements... Don't make short, simple movements and use that for practically all of the choices...

~Depes Crystalline~