depes7448's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hulalaoo Death]

Good one.

I don't like Hulalaoo either........... Hulalaoo is a guy posting gay stuff in the art portal...

~Depes Crystalline~

[Madness Extinction Collab]

Great collab.

Most of the scenes moved slow. Also, there were problems with the layering of objects. And I noticed that the characters slide while they walk. Don't do that. Great work though. Hope to see more.

~Depes Crystalline~

[CounterStrike FlashMovie2]

Not good.

Make this movie longer and put more effort into making it look nicer. Don't copy the same format as another counter strike movie. You need more originality.

~Depes Crystalline~

Mak3ttaja responds:

okok ill try.

[paper doodles]

Needs improvements.

First of all, bring the arm and the pencil to the front. The eraser on the pencil is bent at an odd angle, but that's much a big deal. The fingers on the hand are not very clear. Draw lighting to bring out the arm. Don't use the gradient colors given by the program. The eraser was badly drawn. Again, use lighting to show the edges and the edges of an eraser are slightly round, so try to do that. You can watch the Pencilmation series or Animation vs. Animatior 1 and 2 for help. Using a crumpled peice of paper as the background was good though. Keep animating. You are going to be one of the top animators in no time.

~Depes Crystalline~

[Genericyanideandhappiness]

Nice try

1) When you make a joke have other people tell you if it is actually funny.
2) Put more effort into animation.
3) Choose a song that fits well wih the flash movie.
4) Make your point clear. Why did you make your own version besides just showing us what is obvious?
5) Show a couple people what you have made before presenting it out to the world of hardest-to-please critics...

~Depes Crystalline~

darkmagewizard3 responds:

Beck fits incredibly well with this film.

Also, we can't all be Mindchamber...

:(

[Madness: Rising]

Great!

I like the way you are improving and your unique style of animation. I especially love the new designs you made for Hank and Tricky. This flash is honestly the best I have ever seen as far as animation and effort goes.

[Project Retribution]

Great and funny.

Though their are some things I feel need to be pointed out. First, when they talk and the whole thing just sorta stops, it kind of ruined the feeling of the flash movie. You could have kept the scene just swaying a little as to not lose that feeling. Another thing is the transition from memory to present. Instead of letting the music fade out, you could have stopped it suddenly when that girl talks about her scarf. Also, some of the characters seemed to elongate their limbs from time to time. Anyways, I hope you make a second flash movie to continue this one's story.

~Depes Crystalline~

[Madness Desintegration]

Hmm..

Couple things that stand out. Some of the scenes were slow... More than half of the parts need more originality. I mean come on! STOP using other people's main characters. Oh, and the music could have looped.

~Depes Crystalline~

[Stamp on the Ground]

This is great.

The only complaint I have is the smoothness of the characters' movements. Otherwise, Great artwork and great job.

~Depes Crystalline~

[Madness Underworld]

Its great...

There were quite a few scenes that seemed to be a bit a slow. Also, there were a couple objects that kinda looked like it was copied from something else.... But great job. Looking forward to the next one.

~Depes Crystalline~

leon888 responds:

thanks dude. a bit slow eh? mmm i need fix that...

thanks for the review :D